Dhoni world cup bat🏏 ( Advertisement)

 Hello everyone.......I am shalu Sinha and I am a famous shopkeeper of sports products..........I keep all the things like:- Bat🏏, badminton🎾🎾,tennis etc..........And I also keep the special bat 🏏which had Dhoni played in the world cup🏆🏆.........So, if you want to become a good batsman so, you will come on my shop and purchase.............because you will never find this bat on any another shop.........This is the great opportunity to become yourself a good cricketer.......And, Today's some discount on this shop so, come and purchase.


My shop name:- Shalu's Special Sport 🏏🏏🏏🏏🏏🎾🎾⚽⚽🎳🎳⚾

Contact:- 1234556791

Address:- Belly road, patna road no:-5

Comments

  1. TauqirRahmanMarch 11, 2022 at 5:51 AM

    Positive points_ rising action and climax is present.

    Areas of improvement_ you have to write in outline and After full stop you should start with capital letter.

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    1. Shalu SinhaMarch 11, 2022 at 8:06 AM

      I started with capital letter and I also use outline where I gave full stop.please let me know I didn't understand.

      Delete
  2. Sneha PriyadarshaniMarch 11, 2022 at 5:56 AM

    Positive point:Advertisement is very impressive.

    Area of improvement:capitalization errors.

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    1. Shalu SinhaMarch 11, 2022 at 8:07 AM

      Can you please let me know where I miss capitalisation.so, I correct it .

      Delete

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